You Capture: To The Park

September 10, 2009


A hastily stolen photo
in the park

of her

this lovely little lady I don’t know

I watched her

secretly hoping

that when the years make me her
I’ll read books
in the park

I want to walk the paths
carrying the stories
of my life
in my heart
just as I carry
the bound pages
under my arm

All those broken
lovely stories
mixed with fiction
of poetry
history
and humor

I hope I take that uneasy walk
then
after the years have passed

and now
while I’m navigating this path
the uneasy road
of the unknown

leaps of faith

scraping steps
stooped back
hands holding tightly
to stay up

Broken

working my way
to the bench
that’s too low
and not soft
but somehow just right

I hope

that when life calls out
in the flowers and the breeze

I’ll answer
then and now

to keep living
the broken
and the lovely

Life.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This week’s You Capture assignment was to photograph something
you’ve never photographed before.
The above photo is my contribution to the task.

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Beth at I Should Be Folding Laundry.
(She rocks the party.)

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{ 38 comments }

Haley September 10, 2009 at 9:10 am

What a perfect moment. I like your poem as well.

Thanks for sharing. :-)

Lyn September 10, 2009 at 9:17 am

Pretty shot – love the flowers in the foreground1

Christy M. September 10, 2009 at 9:18 am

Beautiful. Perfect. Touching. Just like you.

Seriously, Heather, I am in awe of your thoughts.

Diana...aka...MeMe September 10, 2009 at 9:19 am

Wow… when the years make me her… Love that!!!

imadramamama September 10, 2009 at 9:46 am

Very, very cool.

Misty September 10, 2009 at 9:55 am

i love this. I want to be like her too…

livinginagirlsworld September 10, 2009 at 9:59 am

So introspective! What a great picture…and ypur words. Just, wow.

Crooked Eyebrow September 10, 2009 at 9:59 am

Amazing shot put with beautiful words.

katdish September 10, 2009 at 10:30 am

That was amazing. Wow.

kiki September 10, 2009 at 10:43 am

Umm… WOW – such a great photo and a great poem! Thanks for sharing!

Stefany September 10, 2009 at 10:49 am

Wonderful post!

Jade September 10, 2009 at 11:24 am

I love the picture and words and thoughts along with it. Great capture!

Jo@Mylestones September 10, 2009 at 11:46 am

Another beautiful non-poem. :-) Love it!

H-Mama September 10, 2009 at 11:47 am

One word. Beautiful.

Kori September 10, 2009 at 11:59 am

Sigh…your words are as much a picture as the actual photo.

Susan warmchocmilk September 10, 2009 at 12:12 pm

Neat Heather. What a leap to write a non-poem like that, but it is wonderful! You are brave and talented, and I'm your friend….how cool is that :)

Kristina P. September 10, 2009 at 12:16 pm

I sort of hate how awesomely talented you are.

Kimberly September 10, 2009 at 1:10 pm

Once again your beautiful heart has touched mine…truly.

blueviolet September 10, 2009 at 1:50 pm

Sometimes I am stunned into silence by your masterful weaving of language and poetry. This is one of those times.

InkMom September 10, 2009 at 2:39 pm

Amen.

*Lissa* September 10, 2009 at 3:59 pm

Beautiful photo, Beautiful words.

Elaine A. September 10, 2009 at 4:41 pm

A pretty poem AND a cool photograph! You're awesome. And great job on the 'assignment'. I couldn't think of anything with my hormone compromised brain…

sara September 10, 2009 at 5:17 pm

wow….I loved this.

Ann's Rants September 10, 2009 at 5:18 pm

Very beautiful.

Thank you.

Mammatalk September 10, 2009 at 6:04 pm

Lovely. Just so lovely!

AnnG September 10, 2009 at 7:20 pm

We all need to be able to enjoy the park like this…great picture!

Jen September 10, 2009 at 7:48 pm

Heather, you are so talented that sometimes I wonder if you know how awesome you are. I love the way that you capture things and write about them. Thank you. Thank you for touching my heart.

Corinne September 10, 2009 at 8:24 pm

First, that photo is fantastic. The colors alone are near brilliant ;)

Second, love your writing. Like always!

happygeek September 10, 2009 at 8:53 pm

Mmmm-hmmmm.
Amen.

Megan @ Hold it Up to the Light September 10, 2009 at 9:07 pm

I can't wait to sit in the park and read. Ahhhh…..one day, one day.

Love the picture and your words. So encouraging this night.

Thanks, friend!

Laura September 10, 2009 at 9:51 pm

what a beautiful photo! love this.

Life Is Beautiful September 10, 2009 at 9:59 pm

What a sweet photo! I wish the beautiful lady could read your post. I think she'd find it touching. I have a soft spot in my heart for elderly people. I can't help but wonder what story their lives would tell.

JCK September 10, 2009 at 11:41 pm

this poem really moved me. Especially this:

working my way
to the bench
that's too low
and not soft
but somehow just right

Just lovely.

Billy Coffey September 11, 2009 at 7:55 am

Wow, that was good. Loved this line: "I'll answer then and now to keep living the broken and the lovely Life."

Kazzy September 11, 2009 at 10:51 am

I love your poetry. I also sneak photos of old people. LOL A few months ago I took one of the cutest old couple walking around the high school track arm in arm. They had to be 80. So sweet!

Eowyn September 13, 2009 at 12:16 am

I want that to be me too, then and now!

Mama Kat September 13, 2009 at 11:08 am

Beautiful poem!! And awesome shot! It's amazing how a simple photo can inspire you to write!

L.T. Elliot September 15, 2009 at 1:23 pm

I love your poetry. Now you have poetry in pictures too.

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